A very good piece from my student and I'm sharing it with you. Read on:
As soon as I realise, I was born. I look pretty similar to a tadpole and as I leave my rounded home, the battle was on. I had to swim like a shark with all my might competing with the others. Using my almighty but tiny tail, I swam. The war was on.
Shoving an pushing just like chickens out of the coop, we traveled through a tunnel. A very dark tunnel. Pretty narrow too like the big things that goes "Vroom" when the light turns red. As it turns green, we enter a bigger tunnel. Some of my best friends were left behind but the battle wasn't won.
The remaining hundreds of us knew that there will only be one sole survivor, maybe two. Soon, we reached a t-junction. I had to gamble just like playing blackjack at the casino. Probably the hardest decision so far but I hit the jackpot. I finally met the ball. As round as the moon.
I stick my big head out and poked it like a balloon. Soon, my tail left me nd that was the end of my journey but I knew the very likes of me will be born when I'm born after a while. A new journey begin.
Shoving an pushing just like chickens out of the coop, we traveled through a tunnel. A very dark tunnel. Pretty narrow too like the big things that goes "Vroom" when the light turns red. As it turns green, we enter a bigger tunnel. Some of my best friends were left behind but the battle wasn't won.
The remaining hundreds of us knew that there will only be one sole survivor, maybe two. Soon, we reached a t-junction. I had to gamble just like playing blackjack at the casino. Probably the hardest decision so far but I hit the jackpot. I finally met the ball. As round as the moon.
I stick my big head out and poked it like a balloon. Soon, my tail left me nd that was the end of my journey but I knew the very likes of me will be born when I'm born after a while. A new journey begin.
I wasn't lost after reading but couldn't stop laughing! It was a descriptive writing piece. Very descriptive indeed!
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